2006 New Mexico Discovery Awards

 

Fiction - Third Prize - Mark David Gerson

Mark David Gerson has been a professional writer, editor and speaker for more than thirty years. His work has been read in magazines and newspapers in the US, Canada and the UK and broadcast on the airwaves of the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation. As well, his inspirational writings are followed on the Internet by subscribers in more than twenty countries. Through public appearances, personal growth workshops and private mentoring, Mark David has inspired groups and individuals across America and beyond to lead richer, more joyful, more creative lives. He lives in Santa Fe. The following is an excerpt from a novel of the same name.

 

THE MOONQUEST

Prologue

Na'an came to me in a dream this night. It was early. I had not been in bed long and the night was newly dark.

"It is time," she said, "time to fix The MoonQuest on parchment."

I was gladdened to see her after so many seasons, but I was not cheered by the message she bore. I tried to engage her in other discourse, but she was single-minded as only a Tikkan dreamwalker can be.

"It is not for me to boast of my exploits," I argued. "Others have sung them. Let them continue."

"No," she said, and her silver tresses shimmered as she shook her head. "It is your story to tell. It is for you to fix it in ink, to set the truth down for all to read."

I tried to resist, to shut Na'an's words from my heart, to return to the dreamless sleep that preceded her appearance. But Tikkan speak only what we know in our hearts to be true, and my heart would not close to her even as my mind longed to. Only by forcing my eyes open and my body to this table was I able to banish her milk-white face from my mind's eye. Only by letting my quill rasp across the blank parchment have I stilled her voice.

But my quill hovers over oceans of emptiness. I don't know what to write, where to begin. The story has so many beginnings and no clear ending. As a bard, as Elderbard, I am trained to know how to weave disparate elements into a tapestry of word and song that brings light and meaning to life. When recounting others' stories, I have no difficulty. The tales unfurl from my tongue as if by magic, as if M'nor herself were singing through me.

Na'an says it is my story. Perhaps she is right. Is that why the words come so reluctantly? So many seasons of storytelling and still I hesitate. Of all the stories to stick in my throat, how ironic that it should be The MoonQuest, a tale of the freeing of story itself.

You see how confused I am? I have not even introduced myself. My truth name is Toshar and I am old, so old that most who knew me by that name have passed on to other worlds.

Toshar... Even I have forgotten the boy who was Toshar, the youth who embarked on The MoonQuest all those seasons ago.

They call me Ko'lar now, the ancient word for Elderbard. It is a sign of honor and respect, but it separates me from the youth I was.

Perhaps Na'an is right. Perhaps it is time to bring back Toshar, to allow the boy I was to touch the man I have become, the man I will soon cease to be. Soon it will be time to release the ageless spirit from this aged body and move on to other realms, set off on other journeys. I have seen it and I welcome it. But it cannot be mine until I have told this story. Na'an insists.

She speaks, even as I sit here in full wakefulness, staring at the shadows cast by my flickering taper. Now, they loom, large and menacing. Now, they flit and flutter in delicate dance. I see it all now, in the leap of light against dark. The shadows will tell me the story and I will write what I see. I will write until my fingers and beard are black with ink. I will write until the story is told.

Only then will I be free to continue my journey. Only then will my daughter, Q'nta, be free to continue hers. She is nearly ready. Ryolan Ò Garan taught her well, taught her the lessons of The MoonQuest. Soon she will live them through my words and will be free to assume the mantle of her birthright, according to the ancient orders of succession:

From father to daughter, mother to son
The mantle passes, the Balance is done

I was an exception to the Law of Balance, a law as old as the land itself. But those were exceptional times, the darkest of ages, in a land where "once upon a time" was a forbidden phrase and fact the only legal tender.

That was the land I was born into, a land of slaughtered bards, a land dulled and divided by fear. That was Q'ntana, and this is its story, and mine... a story that begins once upon a time.

 

I Pre Tena'aa: The Beginning

ONE

The day Yhoshi and O'ric arrived in Pre Tena'aa began much like the cycles of other days that had passed since the Circle of Bards straggled into this remote land. Rising before dawn, we slipped silently through the labyrinth of underground passageways and out into the gray, timeless time between night and day. We gathered in a circle, all twelve of us around Eulisha, following the line of her oak staff as it traced a north-south arc through the sky and then paused, lingering on a spot just above the horizon, where a faint shadow-streaked orb fluttered into view then dissolved.

"We send the strength of our hearts to M'nor that she may return to light in joy and truth," Eulisha said. We touched our right hands from heart to mouth and repeated the refrain. No other words broke the early morning still. Only when spikes of pink and white speared the gloom did we break the circle and file back inside.

Danger rose with the suns. Little traveled though Pre Tena'aa, we were outlaws. Though we didn't officially exist, there was a price on our heads - heads King Fvorag craved as the crowning display on his Wall of Traitors.

No one knew we were here and had been for seven years. No one, save the Tena'aa themselves, and their legendary ferocity kept visitors, including the King's Men, at bay. Legend proclaimed them man-eaters, declared that the suns-bleached bones heaped along the highway and picked clean of all flesh were all that remained of any who strayed from the road that pierced this barren land like an arrow.

In truth, the Tena'aa ate no flesh, only the roots and herbs that flourished in their darkened tunnels and the scratchy grains that swept out across their treeless prairie. Yet their culinary magic transformed these into such incomparable flavors that I was always first inside the cavernous dining hall.

This day was no exception. I raced down the familiar route and took my place at our table just as a Tena'aa server set a steaming bowl of puna porridge in front of me. Often, Gwill'm, the Tena'aa chief, or his brother Heraff joined us for meals. This morning, however, we thirteen bards sat alone, freeing Zakk to resound a familiar theme.

"You must be tired, mother. Let me work with the boy today." My father's younger brother forced his thin lips into a smile of forced charm that fluttered between sneer and servility. His eyes squeezed into black slits that flicked from Eulisha's face to mine.

Eulisha shook her head. She was my grandmother and Elderbard, a title that once ranked alongside the king in importance. At least four score and ten, she smiled with the face of a dried apple, the heart of a child and the laugh of a wind chime rippling in a summer breeze. She laughed now. Eulisha and Zakk had taken over my bard-teaching from my father and tutor, missing these nine years and believed dead.

The solicitous shading faded from Zakk's voice. "I am Am'dar's brother and the boy's uncle and guardian," he stated. "I am to be Elderbard when you... I am to be next Elderbard. It is right that I take over all the boy's education." He silently canvassed the table for support, but only his wife, Myrym, acknowledged him.

"The boy is no longer a boy. He's a young man," Eulisha chided gently. "A young man with a name. Why do you never call him by it?" Zakk glowered at me.

"A young man?" he spat. "Look at him." Zakk's gray eyes bore into mine with unprecedented malice and I flinched as though I had been struck. "You see why I call him boy? A man wouldn't cower like a wounded fahriya. If he is ever to be a man, he needs a man teach him what that means. He needs-"

"Zakk." Eulisha's voice was chill as ice. "I am still Elderbard. I will decide who teaches him and when."

Zakk's eyes flared. He opened his mouth, then shut it again. Clenching his fists, he jerked his shoulders back and stormed from the hall.

And so another breakfast and another quarrel made way for another morning's lessons with Eulisha. If one day in Pre Tena'aa was much the same as the last, my time with Eulisha was always magically unique, alive with storytelling and song as I absorbed the history and lore that all bards must learn and pass on.

"As the youngest surviving bard, you have a special responsibility to learn and remember," she said as I prepared to leave her chamber at midday.

I hesitated at the door.

"What is it, Toshar? What have you been waiting to ask?"

"Are there other stories, Grandmother? Ones you and Zakk haven't taught me? Ones not yet written?"

It was a question Zakk had answered the previous day - with his customary smack across the back of my head.

"What does your heart tell you?" Eulisha asked in turn.

I started to shrug, my usual response to this question, but then sensed an unusual stirring, the faintest glimmer of an inner knowing. It seemed as though a butterfly had landed in my chest, its wings beating in time with my heart. It unsettled me, igniting a spark of fear. But I wanted to please Eulisha, so I listened and pushed and probed, my face contorted with purpose.

"Don't impose your will on it, Toshar. Let it come as it comes. Free your breath."

I exhaled - more sigh than surrender - and shook my head in defeat. I felt nothing, saw nothing, knew nothing.

"You will know what is yours to know when it is time to know it," Eulisha whispered. She stood so close I could smell her sweet-scented soap, the one that always reminded me of my mother. I swallowed hard, trying to hold back the tears, trying to be the man Zakk insisted I be.

"You will know the stories that are yours to know at the same time," she added. "Until then, be still and have patience."

Patience: always difficult counsel for one on the cusp of manhood. I left Eulisha's chamber and wandered blindly through dark tunnels eerily lit greenish gold by the phosphorescent maya weed that climbed their earthen walls. I walked, ignoring the call to lunch, ignoring the call to chores. I walked until my legs ached and I no longer knew where I was. All the while I sought the return of that butterfly, only to push it away whenever it approached.

Day and night are much the same beneath the earth, where time has no meaning and the shadowy glow of maya never alters. Only when a commotion erupted around me did I discover how long I had wandered. From all directions, Tena'aa scurried past and up a ramped shaft to the surface. Curious, I followed. To my surprise, daylight had fled and Aris blazed defiantly in the northern sky. With lesser stars it formed a web of twinkling diamond chips that glinted off the luminous fangs of the Tena'aa.

It was easy to give credence to the legends of their ferocity. It was said, Gwill'm had told me, giggling, that the play of starlight on their giant teeth lured travelers off the road to what seemed to be a settlement, only to be eaten alive, their bones heaped by the road. It was a myth the Tena'aa encouraged, he said. It kept them safe in perilous times.

So I was surprised to see two travelers emerge from the shadows, following a snaking, tooth-lit course through the scrub. It could be a treacherous route, even in daylight, because of the camouflaged air shafts and entryways that pocked the landscape. One traveler rode a dappled mount, the other sat atop a wooden coach drawn by two horses.

These were not King's Men. Yet though that fact alone didn't mark them as friends, I knew them to be such.

I knew and saw much, even as the dim starlight revealed little: the curious rune-like markings on the coach...the even curiouser horses that drew it, whose names I knew (without knowing how) to be Rykka and Ta'ar, the ancient words for dawn and dusk. But for the white bolts that flashed from forehead to muzzle, Rykka's coloring was the pale blue of morning sky, Ta'ar's the smoky plum of twilight.

Neither bridle nor reins secured them to the coach or to the most curious piece of all: the driver, who sat upon a three-legged stool perched at the front of the coach's flat roof, clawed hands folded on his lap.

Clad in a robe of deep forest green flecked with tongues of flame and matching conical cap, he paid little heed to his horses' progress. Instead, his unblinking eyes found first Eulisha, then me.

Bald and clean-shaven, his skin was neither smooth nor wrinkled, neither light nor dark. It had a translucent scaliness, as though it could flake off at the touch. Ancient, yet ageless and ethereal: That's how O'ric seemed when I first saw him.
His companion, who I would soon know as Yhoshi, was near to my age and wore dun-colored garments that hung loosely on a muscular frame. He had bristly blond hair and a brush of platinum on his upper lip and chin that had the opposite of its intended effect on a cherubic face. Sea-blue eyes, hooded with suspicion, darted warily as he passed me.

It was strange to see so clearly in so little light, but I didn't question it. I just watched. And listened to the faint strains of music that wafted toward me from O'ric's coach.

At last they stopped, only to be surrounded by a circle of flinting, glinting teeth. Panicked, Yhoshi heel-kicked his horse to turn and turn again as he sought a way through the ring of tightly linked arms. All O'ric gazed calmly in my direction. Despite the dark, I knew he saw me as clearly as I saw him.

Finally, shoulders slumped, Yhoshi brought his horse to O'ric's side. Nothing stirred, Yhoshi's fidgeting the only movement in the statue-like scene. Even Rykka and Ta'ar, their necks bent over the grass, suspended their chewing.

Then, as if acting on a signal from O'ric that only he could detect, Gwill'm stepped forward, the circle closing in behind him. He stood motionless for some minutes more and even I, who knew his gentleness, was struck by the savage aspect he presented. Little taller than a child, his tiny head was a mountain range of warts and moles dominated by a glistening glacier of teeth and two lakes of fiery, unlidded eyes. His right arm, three times the length of his left, belted his waist in a snakelike coil that culminated in three crooked fingers that themselves ended in a hook of claws. In place of a nose and ears, forked, twig-like antennae protruded from dark holes in his skull, their tips quivering.

"Welcome," he said at last, bowing first to O'ric then to Yhoshi. "Welcome to the land of the Tena'aa. And to you, my friend -" he uncoiled his preternaturally long arm and extended it upward to O'ric, "- most special greetings. It has been too many dark moons since we have seen you."

O'ric nodded in reply, finally turning his gaze from me. He grasped Gwill'm's claw and stepped down as Gwill'm wrapped his lengthy arm around O'ric in a Tena'aa embrace.

"M'nor has called," he said to Gwill'm, even as one yellow eye wandered back to me. "The time is now."


TWO

Dinner was always a special time in Pre Tena'aa - served in the largest, grandest and deepest of the subterranean chambers, its lofty ceiling hung with thousands of starry tapers. Yet this night was more special still. Instead of random clusters scattered through the hall, the low, wooden tables were set in paired concentric semicircles that enclosed a small, central inner circle: the ring of honor, where we bards were joined by O'ric and Yhoshi, and Gwill'm, his mate Minda'aa, and their son, Bold'ar.

Yhoshi said little at first, and ate less. He picked suspiciously at the strange stew that filled his bowl, wrinkling his nose at the aromatic curls of steam that rose lazily from it. I devoured mine greedily. Served only on rare occassions, the lustrous orange-yellow concoction was one of my favorites, its naturally sweet broth an ideal base for the red bela nuts, green zanga fruit and elegantly thin strips of purple gela'aa that floated within.

"Aren't you hungry, young man?" Myrym asked.

Yhoshi's gaze shifted nervously from Bold'ar, cleaning his second bowl of stew with a long yellow tongue, to the two great cooking fires that danced at the far end of the hall. Loud crackling pops exploded from one, where a sapphire oval of oil-brushed p'yan root sizzled. A man-size cauldron bubbled into the second.

"H-hungry? No, I mean yes. But I can't." He shuddered as Bold'ar held his bowl up for a refill. "How can you?" he asked Myrym.

"It isn't true, you know," O'ric interjected, his first words since the start of the meal. Until that moment, he had stared silently into the middle distance, eating nothing. Now, he dipped a spoon into his bowl and ate distractedly.

"What isn't?" Yhoshi asked.

"The bones. You asked about the bones."

Gwill'm bugged his eyes, bared his teeth and lunged. All color drained from Yhoshi's face.

"Stop it. You're frightening him." Minda'aa's long arm caught Gwill'm in mid-charge.

She turned to Yhoshi. "Forgive him, Yhoshi. He thinks he's playing. Someone," she glared at Gwill'm, "should have told you about the food. Tell him, Toshar."

Once I did, Yhoshi's face grew as red as the untouched bela nuts on his plate.

"I-I thought...," he stammered. "They say..."

"And we're glad they do," Minda'aa said.

"The Tena'aa are as kindly as they are feared," Eulisha said, "which has made them the ideal sanctuary for us until The Return, may it come soon."

"It will," said Zakk, clearing his scowl as his voice rose above the mealtime clatter and din. "I have seen it, and you," he proclaimed to Eulisha, "will lead it."

Eulisha laughed gently. "My leading days have passed, Zakk, and my traveling days along with them. No, one of you-," she glanced from bard to bard, from Zakk to Myrym to Plenath, from Mord'c to Polit to Kayn, from Komr'a to Sitha'aa to Ghônn, and all the way around the circle to me. "One of you will lead The Return, will lead the great journey that will restore the truth of the tale to Q'ntana. I pray only to live long enough to know that the journey has begun, that The Return has been joined."

"But Mother -" Zakk began.

Eulisha raised her hand to silence him. Shaking his head, he returned to his meal. Myrym patted his hand as an uneasy silence fell over the table.

"Here," Minda'aa said at last, "take some more stew." She ladled a cup of the aromatic broth first into Yhoshi's bowl then mine. Turning back to Yhoshi she asked, "Tell me, young traveler, what brings you here - and in such fine company?" She tilted her head toward O'ric.

"I'm not sure I know," he said between mouthfuls. "I was riding toward the capital. I'm a Messenger, you see. I had taken the road, something I hardly ever do, but this time I counted on the King's Men being even more scared of those stories about you than I am." He smiled at Minda'aa. "Than I was."

"One moment the road was empty. The next, an odd-looking coach was right in front of me. It came out of nowhere." Yhoshi looked expectantly at O'ric. But O'ric, lost in a world of his own, said nothing. Yhoshi continued. "'I have been expecting you, Yhoshi son of Yhosha,' O'ric said to me. My first impulse was to ride off, I can tell you. I'm still not sure why I didn't. And here I am."

"That's O'ric's way," Gwill'm said. He stretched his arm to the next table and retrieved an ale pitcher from which he refilled O'ric's tankard. O'ric paid it no heed.

"Where do you go next?" I asked.

Yhoshi shrugged, turning again to O'ric, whose yellow eyes suddenly snapped into focus.

"Along the road you must take," he said, one eye fixed on Yhoshi, the other on me.

Once again, I sensed that he knew me, more fully even than I knew myself. The sensation lasted an instant and was gone, as was his focus.

"What about you?" Yhoshi asked. "I never thought I would meet a bard. I've heard rumors of living bards, of a community of bards that had fled Q'ntana, but I didn't believe. And here you are, inside Q'ntana."

Plenath rose and raised his arms in a prophetic stance. He looked the role with his white hair, beard and robe and glassy stare. "The long arm of the Tena'aa extended itself to us in hospitality and security," he intoned.

"What my brother means," explained Myrym, "is that Gwill'm's brother, Heraff, found us, starved and half-dead, in the mountains of Pinq'an." She leaned across the table toward Yhoshi. "But tell us, what news do you carry from the outside world? We hear little, though Eulisha sees much."

Zakk glared at Myrym.

"And Zakk," she added quickly.

Yhoshi's face darkened. "It's not good," he said. "The King's built a second Wall of Traitors in the capital. There was no more room on the first," he added bitterly.
"The King's Men kill more Believers every day. They don't just kill. They rape. They torture. They're... they're evil." He clenched his fists knuckle-white. "I've seen Believers take their own lives to avoid being discovered." Anger blazed in his eyes. "No place is safe anymore, not even this one. Spies are everywhere. Even the rocks and trees-"

"Yes, yes," Zakk interrupted, "we know all this. Haven't I seen it? Haven't I told of it?" He drummed his fingers irritably on the tabletop until Myrym gently covered his hand with her own.

"Pinq'an," I repeated softly, stung by a sharp memory.

"Over by the eastern frontier?" Yhoshi asked.

Zakk jerked his hand free of Myrym's. "That was our destination," he growled. "But with an old woman and a young child -" A sharp glance from Eulisha stilled him.

Still standing, Plenath again raised his arms and declaimed, "And the blinding snows of the q'eenah blowing clouds of drenched cotton in our paths -"

"Yes, Plenath," Myrym broke in, "and the blinding snows of the q'eenah blowing clouds of drenched cotton in our paths... and no food, warm clothes or shelter, we had settled in to die."

"Better to die in the q'eenah's company than the King's," snapped Zakk.

"Better not to die at all." Eulisha's gentian eyes burned into Zakk's until he looked away. She turned to Yhoshi. "My son would not trust Heraff," she said.

"I was prepared to die, Mother. That is all."

"You were ready to die, Zakk. That is not the same. Heraff's eyes told me he was no enemy. Heraff's heart sang of friendship."

"But the bones, Mother... The stories..."

"You're a bard, Zakk. You are trained to know when stories are true or false." This last sentence she uttered sternly, the lines in her face fixed as in stone. But as quickly as they set, they melted back into an ever-changing maze of folds and wrinkles. She clasped Zakk's smooth hands in her own, spotted and quivering.

"We must stop our bickering, son. We must wait. Patiently." She released Zakk's hands and cupped hers firmly around her goblet, staring into it as though seeking M'nor there. "We must wait for The Return."

"For how long?" Yhoshi asked.

"As long as we must," she replied, looking at O'ric. As their unblinking eyes locked, a filament of fire raced between them. All at our table fell into expectant silence. When the fiery energy linking them had dimmed, Eulisha smiled and sighed.

"The wait is nearly over," she said. It was the saddest smile I had ever seen.

 

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