2006 New Mexico Discovery Awards

 

Fiction - First Prize - Dina Rose McQueen

Dina Rose McQueen has been writing for more than twenty years in a variety of genres, including screenwriting, novel writing, short fiction, essay, travel writing and memoir. Her fiction credits include Red Dancefloor Press, Bohemia Chronicle, Neologisms, Crankmail and Inside/Outside Magazine. In 1998 she received her masters degree in Biography/Autobiography from Goddard College. She started a self-publishing company in 2002, where she coaches writers, edits and designs book for people who want to self-publish. She lives in Santa Fe.

 

EGO BURNING

We've all experienced it, I think: you're driving home and fire trucks speed past you, and for a moment that you try to push away you pray, God, please don't let it be my house.

Yesterday, this was me driving home from the esthetician where I had extractions and a super-hydration facial. I turned onto Zia, crossing Old Pecos Trail, then ran the stop sign and made a left onto Old Santa Fe Trail. It was then, when I could see the smoke pluming above, that I knew my casita was on fire and my cat just might be dead.



I'm standing over Cute Pea on the metal table in Room #3 at Doctor Morganstein's office waiting for the blood test results. I reach in to stroke her as she huddles up against the back wall inside the safety of her hard plastic travel box. The pink fleece blanket is thick with six months worth of black-and-white Cute Pea fur. I left my husband in Colorado for my dream job as the Managing Editor of a very well funded upstart literary magazine. He couldn't bear to leave his job as the director of the most sought after rock climbing school in the country. So we decided to stay a committed married couple who just happen to live in different states.

I'm visualizing Chas' new pumpkin-colored Honda Element surrounded in rainbow light as he maneuvers it through the mountain passes. By the time I was able to reach him last night it was late. A new moon sky kept me from encouraging him to head out in the dark. I'd checked Cute Pea and me into a cheap but reputationally clean and quiet motel knowing I might be there for a while. I'd managed to salvage-well, nothing much. But Cute Pea had escaped through a window I keep cracked for her while I'm away. And when I rushed to the burning casita and found her meowing up at me outside the back door, I scooped her up and ran back to the car, sobbing with relief, and then laughing hysterically, then sobbing, and then laughing.

During this emotional roller coaster, the opening scene of The Producers popped into my head, the original film with Gene Wilder and Zero Mostel. Gene Wilder is in hysterics, and cries out, I'm hysterical . . . I'm wet, I'm in pain, and I'm still hysterical. Zero Mostel throws water on him, and slaps him in an attempt to sober him up. But poor Gene Wilder cannot get hold of himself. I saw myself as the Gene Wilder character, which made me shriek again with hysterical laughter, and then at the absurdity of my outburst, I ended up crying again. At this point I remembered that the scene ends with the Zero Mostel character saying to Gene Wilder, Go away, you frighten me, which snapped me back to reality.

I opened up the hatchback then to let Cute Pea into her travel crate, whereupon she scurried inside and did not leave until the middle of the first of many motel nights to come. After a drink of water and a pee in a new, cheap litter box I got at the 24-hour Walgreen's, she jumped up on the bed and trotted over to me. I lifted the covers to let her in, where she stayed cuddled close to me purring for a long while before falling asleep in my arms.

Doctor Morganstein returns to Room #3 and Cute Pea shrinks into herself like a pill bug. She does not understand the words I tell her, that she will not be pricked again today. She was diagnosed with kidney disease last year in Colorado and I've been administering subcutaneous fluids weekly ever since. This morning's emergency trip to the vet is to determine that the trauma from being stuck alone inside a burning house did not further damage her kidneys. I look at my fifteen-year-old baby Cute Pea hiding from the pain of her little life and start to cry.

"She's fine," says the doctor. "Actually, her blood work indicates her kidneys are functioning better than they were when we checked last month."

"Thank God."

"As long as she has you as her mommy," Doctor Morganstein encourages, "she'll be just fine."

I thank the doctor as she leaves the room and sink onto the padded bench, looking at this small, helpless animal thinking, in fact, what a terrible mommy I've been. I bury my face in my hands, then, and cry in silent heaps until Cute Pea crawls out of her box meowing and jumps up onto my lap. I hold her close and let my tears fall onto her cozy neck.

"I'm so sorry, little baby girl," I cry. "I am so, so sorry."

Back in the car, Cute Pea safe in her crate on the passenger seat, I sit frozen behind the steering wheel . . . until the immensity of what has happened comes crashing down on me, leaving me pissed as all hell.

"Shit!" I scream as I pound the wheel with both hands, over and over and over.

"Shit, shit, shit!"

Volume two of my magazine is supposed to get to press this week, and there's no way in hell I'm going to manage this with the millions of fire related tasks I need to get done. The insurance company to fill out umpteen forms (thank God I have renters insurance), the other insurance company to see if they'll replace burned up prescriptions, the used clothing store, the property manager . . . Oh crap! I'm homeless!

I take a deep breath to calm myself down. And another. I've so much to do. But I cannot muster the energy to turn the key. So I just sit there looking at my cat. And I sit. I'm as still as a lake on a windless afternoon, trying to watch my breath as it flows in and out the tip of my nose. Until it all comes rushing back:

I'm remembering how sad I was feeling when I drew a bath yesterday. How soothing the hot water felt, the scent of the rose oil, and the single candle on the tub's ledge that attempted to remind me of the all-encompassing Love of the Universe. I can hear my sobs echo off the tile walls as I recall this scene. My cat jumped up to join me, and sat on the porcelain edge close to my face. Another Sunday morning without my husband, and I was feeling so lonely. Cute Pea knew this and pawed at me, wanting me to connect with her. I sensed she wanted me to know I was not alone. This gesture moved me to action. I leapt out of the tub, wrapped myself in a bath sheet, and picked her up to cuddle her close. This animal is always right: I do have a friend with me; at times the best friend I've ever known. And, oh yes, I was the one who wanted the job out of state away from my husband-away from the task of making and raising a baby with him. I'm the one who sent the resume, without even asking him how he felt. It is all my fault.

By the time I shut my pity party down, I was late for my appointment. I threw on some jeans and a t-shirt, grabbed my bag and a banana, and rushed out of the house. Without checking to see if I'd blown out the candle.

As I sit in the car remembering this string of events, panic shoots through my blood. The candle flame surely must have caught a breeze from the open skylight and kissed the lace shower curtain that I had pushed completely to the foot of the tub. Then, my anger turns to grief as it hits me how much of my stuff I am going to miss. I think about our wedding album that I took with me from Colorado, my emerald ring that my mother had given me on my sixteenth birthday, that her mother had given her on her sixteenth birthday, that her mother . . . My books, my computer, my Managing Editor wardrobe, my ski gear. "I'm such a goddamn idiot," I whisper, shaking my head from side to side.

I look at Cute Pea then who has her head turned toward the sun. She is wearing a satisfied expression that never ceases to stop me cold. She has her cozy box, the warmth of the sun, and me. In her world, all is well. The truth is this: the insurance company will give me enough money to replace what is replaceable. And the remainder, well, it will just have to rest in peace. Could it have taken losing all of my possessions for me to realize that my loved ones are all that really matters?

God I miss my husband.

It is then that I come to an awareness: until now, I've never truly missed anybody.

On the way back to the motel, I stop at the market for a few items that will fit in the mini fridge. When Chas arrives, I won't want to go out to eat, as leaving my cat alone at this point is not an option. As I peruse the aisles for some goat cheese, tomatoes, olives and a baguette, I stroll by the baby food and feel my heart actually flutter. I push away leading thoughts, grab a cold bottle of Gruet Brut, and check out.



Time refuses to stand still no matter how loudly I scream at it. In this sacred moment I have become the witness of my life. In this fleeting moment I realize how big my love has grown. I see my heart as large as the earth, and the hugeness of its capacity to forgive myself for my many mistakes showers me with peace.

I am sitting on the motel bed putting the finishing topcoat on my nails with polish I got at the market. Cute Pea has jumped onto the overstuffed chair in the corner and begun her afternoon cleaning ritual. As I plug my phone into the charger and turn to look at her, she pauses to look at me. I struggle to keep from breaking down again, and take a deep breath in. How could I have left this precious animal in the casita with a burning candle? Have I been that self-absorbed? As if she understands my thoughts, she lets out a peep-like meow and returns to the task at hand, delighting in the practice of cleaning herself.

These are the moments to remember, I tell myself. I realize then how fully present I am in this motel room, listening to the sound of my cat's tongue as it scrapes itself across her long fur. I love the way her little head bobs up and down as she tries to beautify the hair beneath her chin. And the way her head dips as she lifts a paw up to lick it, then stroke it across her eyes, brings me unspeakable joy.
The ringing phone on the bedside table startles me. I feel my heart race as I go to answer it.

"Hello?"

The front desk clerk tells me there's a gentleman named Chas requesting my room number. I guess in the madness of our conversations about the fire I failed to let him know what room I'm staying in. My husband is not the kind of thirty-year-old one would expect in 2006; he believes cell phones are a ploy to give the planet brain damage so the government can continue to treat us like morons. Thus, he's in the lobby wondering where the hell I am.

I open the door and my beautiful husband rushes in, his face a lined, worried map directing me straight to his heart. He grabs me so hard I feel my ribs crush beneath his strength. I take comfort in this pain, cherishing my husband's need to touch me, to know that I am alive and well.

"You feel so good," he says, as I allow his arms to nurture me. He lightly rubs his cheek against mine, and I feel his tears moisten my face. "Like coming home after being in a foreign country for lifetimes."

Chas picks me up then, and I relax into his embrace as he carries me over to the bed, gently sets me down, and cozies in next to me. He kisses me on the forehead so lightly it tickles. Then he brushes each of my eyes with his lips, next the tip of my nose, and then my mouth. My body responds to the kisses on my neck, my chest. And as I let him slip my t-shirt over my head, and I watch him travel lower, I release the last twenty-four hours from my mind's grip. I remind myself that stuff is just stuff. But love can never be replaced. This love that I so easily put on the back burner to pursue a path of ego gratification. This love that fills me, challenges me, comforts me.

I notice my breath has quickened as Chas returns to meet me face to face. I burrow into his neck, and feel time explode inside my heart: my diaphragm is in the drawer of the bedside table that was inside the casita that burned down. And I am ovulating.

"I love you," I whisper into my husband's ear as tears roll down my face. "We're going to be great parents."

I turn to see where Cute Pea is and find her curled up in a ball, fast asleep on the motel chair in the corner. And in this moment that I wish would last forever, as I feel sunshine travel from my belly to the top of my head, I know for sure: Everything is going to be all right.


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